Your weakness as a writer (IMHO) is verbosity and generality (the two are often related).
I’ve been thinking about this, and I think that is my biggest problem. It actually seems related to the way I talk as well—I often recall over-informing in person.
The most recent post is something of a different style, hopefully shorter and easier to read. I look forward to getting feedback.
I’ve been thinking about this, and I think that is my biggest problem. It actually seems related to the way I talk as well—I often recall over-informing in person.
The most recent post is something of a different style, hopefully shorter and easier to read. I look forward to getting feedback.
That is a vast improvement over some of your other posts. Good work.